Avalanche are dangerous. Avalanche is the important thing of the story because Wong take care of shek. Avalanche are scary things to be in example like shek got buried so Wong help shek to get better. Avalanche are dangerous to be in because you could get hurt or die. Avalanche are very snowy and windy. That’s why avalanche are dangerous.
The most important part of the story called Coolies is when the brothers worked hard all day long. It is important because they earned money so their family could survive.Most of Chinese people went to America because they disagreed with the Chinese government and there was rebellions. This made them poor. This part of the story where workers were building the railway shows that the work wasn’t easy for them. They had to hold a sledgehammer all day and they didn’t get paid much. It was also unsafe because they lived in drafty tents, they had to put dynamite in the mountain, and in the winter they wore the same things as summer. This is why the most important part of the story is when brothers worked hard.
The avalanche is the most important part of the story. It is important because it’s at the top of my story map also avalanches are one of the most dangerous disasters. Their job was very dangerous because they could get hurt and die. In this part of the story, Wong was worried about Shek because Shek did not come back and Shek got buried in the avalanche. Wong the younger brother tried to help but the guards won’t let him. This shows you that the guards didn’t care about the Chinese people. Wong was the one that was taking care of Shek for a while. Shek was half frozen and very cold. Wong was responsible. That is why the avalanche part is important and dangerous.
One of most important parts of the story is when the company and the government did not invite the Chinese workers to the celebration. When the Chinese workers were done building the railroad, then the government did not invite them. They did not invite the Chinese because they didn’t care about the Chinese workers. Shek and Wong were feeling great about themselves because they knew who built the railroad so it didn’t matter to them that they were not invited. One of most important parts of the story is when the company and the government did not invite the Chinese workers to the celebration.