My Trip

In china it is very awesome because I went to my friends house to play my friends iPad and my own iPad. In china I was playing around  with my friends it is very fun I teach my friend how to play what time  is it Mr. wolf. In china I went to a place to eat ice-cream cone there are strawberry and banana on the top for the ice cream cone. In china I went to the pools the  fields  good and it is very hot in the pools and I get to buy so much and it tastes so so so good even the water tastes so good. also there are customers wet to my house. They are 7 pools that I went. I was sleeping over. My trip is awesome and fun.

 

 

 

One thought on “My Trip”

  1. Hi,
    Your essay on My Trip is good. But little grammatical mistakes in the sentences. Just keep writing you will get over it.For ex:In china it is you should write In china it was a awesome trip.
    Shabnam

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